How to write 'right after graduation' in biography











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I am writing a biography and I want to write a sentence that is "Right after graduation, I joined the institute of X to work as an academic researcher".



Can you help me in re-writing this sentence in a better way, especially the first part?










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  • What do you think is wrong with it?
    – StoneyB
    51 mins ago










  • 'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
    – Anas
    50 mins ago










  • "joined the institute" is worse...
    – Weather Vane
    40 mins ago












  • I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
    – StoneyB
    38 mins ago










  • @WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
    – StoneyB
    9 mins ago















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I am writing a biography and I want to write a sentence that is "Right after graduation, I joined the institute of X to work as an academic researcher".



Can you help me in re-writing this sentence in a better way, especially the first part?










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  • What do you think is wrong with it?
    – StoneyB
    51 mins ago










  • 'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
    – Anas
    50 mins ago










  • "joined the institute" is worse...
    – Weather Vane
    40 mins ago












  • I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
    – StoneyB
    38 mins ago










  • @WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
    – StoneyB
    9 mins ago













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I am writing a biography and I want to write a sentence that is "Right after graduation, I joined the institute of X to work as an academic researcher".



Can you help me in re-writing this sentence in a better way, especially the first part?







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  • What do you think is wrong with it?
    – StoneyB
    51 mins ago










  • 'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
    – Anas
    50 mins ago










  • "joined the institute" is worse...
    – Weather Vane
    40 mins ago












  • I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
    – StoneyB
    38 mins ago










  • @WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
    – StoneyB
    9 mins ago


















  • What do you think is wrong with it?
    – StoneyB
    51 mins ago










  • 'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
    – Anas
    50 mins ago










  • "joined the institute" is worse...
    – Weather Vane
    40 mins ago












  • I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
    – StoneyB
    38 mins ago










  • @WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
    – StoneyB
    9 mins ago
















What do you think is wrong with it?
– StoneyB
51 mins ago




What do you think is wrong with it?
– StoneyB
51 mins ago












'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
– Anas
50 mins ago




'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
– Anas
50 mins ago












"joined the institute" is worse...
– Weather Vane
40 mins ago






"joined the institute" is worse...
– Weather Vane
40 mins ago














I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
– StoneyB
38 mins ago




I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
– StoneyB
38 mins ago












@WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
– StoneyB
9 mins ago




@WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
– StoneyB
9 mins ago















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