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I have recently joined a company , my manager has asked me to send a introductory email which he will forward to all employees in company. I have came up with a email but I think it has issues and its not fluent. can you guys please suggest some modifications on the same? Hi, I’m Manish, I recently joined Company A as Lead software engineer and I’m excited to explore new challenges with Company A. I moved from California where I was working for Company B, prior to that I was working in Singapore for an investment bank. I’m interested in mobile application development, system design, scaling, and security. I have experienced snow only twice when I was a kid and visited Kashmir and 1 yr. back when I hiked on Mount Shasta, so I’m excited about this winter/snow season and learning snow sports