Grammer correction needed











up vote
-1
down vote

favorite












I have recently joined a company , my manager has asked me to send a introductory email which he will forward to all employees in company.



I have came up with a email but I think it has issues and its not fluent.



can you guys please suggest some modifications on the same?



Hi, I’m Manish,



I recently joined Company A as Lead software engineer and I’m excited to explore new challenges with Company A.



I moved from California where I was working for Company B, prior to that I was working in Singapore for an investment bank.



I’m interested in mobile application development,  system design, scaling, and security.



I have experienced snow only twice when I was a kid and visited Kashmir and 1 yr. back when I hiked on Mount Shasta, so I’m excited about this winter/snow season and learning snow sports.



In my leisure I enjoy reading, fishkeeping, playing tennis and traveling.





grammar sentence-correction







share|improve this question







New contributor




Manish Parab is a new contributor to this site. Take care in asking for clarification, commenting, and answering.
Check out our Code of Conduct.
























    up vote
    -1
    down vote

    favorite












    I have recently joined a company , my manager has asked me to send a introductory email which he will forward to all employees in company.



    I have came up with a email but I think it has issues and its not fluent.



    can you guys please suggest some modifications on the same?



    Hi, I’m Manish,
    

    
I recently joined Company A as Lead software engineer and I’m excited to explore new challenges with Company A.
    

    
I moved from California where I was working for Company B, prior to that I was working in Singapore for an investment bank.
    

    
I’m interested in mobile application development,  system design, scaling, and security.
    

    
I have experienced snow only twice when I was a kid and visited Kashmir and 1 yr. back when I hiked on Mount Shasta, so I’m excited about this winter/snow season and learning snow sports.
    

    
In my leisure I enjoy reading, fishkeeping, playing tennis and traveling.





    grammar sentence-correction







    share|improve this question







    New contributor




    Manish Parab is a new contributor to this site. Take care in asking for clarification, commenting, and answering.
    Check out our Code of Conduct.






















      up vote
      -1
      down vote

      favorite









      up vote
      -1
      down vote

      favorite











      I have recently joined a company , my manager has asked me to send a introductory email which he will forward to all employees in company.



      I have came up with a email but I think it has issues and its not fluent.



      can you guys please suggest some modifications on the same?



      Hi, I’m Manish,
      

      
I recently joined Company A as Lead software engineer and I’m excited to explore new challenges with Company A.
      

      
I moved from California where I was working for Company B, prior to that I was working in Singapore for an investment bank.
      

      
I’m interested in mobile application development,  system design, scaling, and security.
      

      
I have experienced snow only twice when I was a kid and visited Kashmir and 1 yr. back when I hiked on Mount Shasta, so I’m excited about this winter/snow season and learning snow sports.
      

      
In my leisure I enjoy reading, fishkeeping, playing tennis and traveling.





      grammar sentence-correction







      share|improve this question







      New contributor




      Manish Parab is a new contributor to this site. Take care in asking for clarification, commenting, and answering.
      Check out our Code of Conduct.











      I have recently joined a company , my manager has asked me to send a introductory email which he will forward to all employees in company.



      I have came up with a email but I think it has issues and its not fluent.



      can you guys please suggest some modifications on the same?



      Hi, I’m Manish,
      

      
I recently joined Company A as Lead software engineer and I’m excited to explore new challenges with Company A.
      

      
I moved from California where I was working for Company B, prior to that I was working in Singapore for an investment bank.
      

      
I’m interested in mobile application development,  system design, scaling, and security.
      

      
I have experienced snow only twice when I was a kid and visited Kashmir and 1 yr. back when I hiked on Mount Shasta, so I’m excited about this winter/snow season and learning snow sports.
      

      
In my leisure I enjoy reading, fishkeeping, playing tennis and traveling.





      grammar sentence-correction




      grammar sentence-correction






      share|improve this question







      New contributor




      Manish Parab is a new contributor to this site. Take care in asking for clarification, commenting, and answering.
      Check out our Code of Conduct.











      share|improve this question







      New contributor




      Manish Parab is a new contributor to this site. Take care in asking for clarification, commenting, and answering.
      Check out our Code of Conduct.









      share|improve this question




      share|improve this question






      New contributor




      Manish Parab is a new contributor to this site. Take care in asking for clarification, commenting, and answering.
      Check out our Code of Conduct.









      asked 18 mins ago









      Manish Parab

      1




      1




      New contributor




      Manish Parab is a new contributor to this site. Take care in asking for clarification, commenting, and answering.
      Check out our Code of Conduct.





      New contributor





      Manish Parab is a new contributor to this site. Take care in asking for clarification, commenting, and answering.
      Check out our Code of Conduct.






      Manish Parab is a new contributor to this site. Take care in asking for clarification, commenting, and answering.
      Check out our Code of Conduct.



























          active

          oldest

          votes











          Your Answer








          StackExchange.ready(function() {
          var channelOptions = {
          tags: "".split(" "),
          id: "97"
          };
          initTagRenderer("".split(" "), "".split(" "), channelOptions);

          StackExchange.using("externalEditor", function() {
          // Have to fire editor after snippets, if snippets enabled
          if (StackExchange.settings.snippets.snippetsEnabled) {
          StackExchange.using("snippets", function() {
          createEditor();
          });
          }
          else {
          createEditor();
          }
          });

          function createEditor() {
          StackExchange.prepareEditor({
          heartbeatType: 'answer',
          convertImagesToLinks: false,
          noModals: true,
          showLowRepImageUploadWarning: true,
          reputationToPostImages: null,
          bindNavPrevention: true,
          postfix: "",
          imageUploader: {
          brandingHtml: "Powered by u003ca class="icon-imgur-white" href="https://imgur.com/"u003eu003c/au003e",
          contentPolicyHtml: "User contributions licensed under u003ca href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/"u003ecc by-sa 3.0 with attribution requiredu003c/au003e u003ca href="https://stackoverflow.com/legal/content-policy"u003e(content policy)u003c/au003e",
          allowUrls: true
          },
          noCode: true, onDemand: true,
          discardSelector: ".discard-answer"
          ,immediatelyShowMarkdownHelp:true
          });


          }
          });






          Manish Parab is a new contributor. Be nice, and check out our Code of Conduct.










          draft saved

          draft discarded


















          StackExchange.ready(
          function () {
          StackExchange.openid.initPostLogin('.new-post-login', 'https%3a%2f%2fenglish.stackexchange.com%2fquestions%2f476741%2fgrammer-correction-needed%23new-answer', 'question_page');
          }
          );

          Post as a guest















          Required, but never shown






























          active

          oldest

          votes













          active

          oldest

          votes









          active

          oldest

          votes






          active

          oldest

          votes








          Manish Parab is a new contributor. Be nice, and check out our Code of Conduct.










          draft saved

          draft discarded


















          Manish Parab is a new contributor. Be nice, and check out our Code of Conduct.













          Manish Parab is a new contributor. Be nice, and check out our Code of Conduct.












          Manish Parab is a new contributor. Be nice, and check out our Code of Conduct.
















          Thanks for contributing an answer to English Language & Usage Stack Exchange!


          • Please be sure to answer the question. Provide details and share your research!

          But avoid …



          • Asking for help, clarification, or responding to other answers.

          • Making statements based on opinion; back them up with references or personal experience.


          To learn more, see our tips on writing great answers.





          Some of your past answers have not been well-received, and you're in danger of being blocked from answering.


          Please pay close attention to the following guidance:


          • Please be sure to answer the question. Provide details and share your research!

          But avoid …



          • Asking for help, clarification, or responding to other answers.

          • Making statements based on opinion; back them up with references or personal experience.


          To learn more, see our tips on writing great answers.




          draft saved


          draft discarded














          StackExchange.ready(
          function () {
          StackExchange.openid.initPostLogin('.new-post-login', 'https%3a%2f%2fenglish.stackexchange.com%2fquestions%2f476741%2fgrammer-correction-needed%23new-answer', 'question_page');
          }
          );

          Post as a guest















          Required, but never shown





















































          Required, but never shown














          Required, but never shown












          Required, but never shown







          Required, but never shown

































          Required, but never shown














          Required, but never shown












          Required, but never shown







          Required, but never shown







          -

          Popular posts from this blog

          What visual should I use to simply compare current year value vs last year in Power BI desktop

          Image
          0 I have column SubToBind that shows current year ratio and column PY SubToBind which shows previous year ratio. How can I simply create a card that would be displaying them both in a nice way? Something like that: I cannot achieve that with regular card, I also tried Card with States by OKViz but also unable to see both values. In KPI visual - I dont like the word "Goal", it will confuse end users. Are there any cards or other visuals that would do the job? Thanks powerbi dax powerbi-embedded share | improve this question edited Jun 11 '18 at 20:11 Oleg
          Read more

          Alexandru Averescu

          Image
          Alexandre Averescu Alexandru Averescu Naissance 3 avril 1859 Babele, Ismail  (ro) près de Izmaïl (principauté de Moldavie) Décès 2 octobre 1938 (à 79 ans) [ 1 ] Bucarest Origine   Roumanie Arme cavalerie Grade Maréchal Années de service 1901-1917 Commandement chef d'état-major général 2 e  armée 3 e  armée Groupe d'armée sud armée du Danube Conflits Guerre russo-turque de 1877-1878 Deuxième guerre balkanique Première Guerre mondiale Faits d'armes Bataille de Turtucaia/Tutrakan Bataille de Mărăști Distinctions Autres fonctions 3 fois président du Conseil des ministres ministre des Affaires étrangères ministre sans portefeuille conseiller de la Couronne modifier   Alexandre Averescu (en roumain : Alexandru Averescu .mw-parser-output .prononciation>a{background:url("//upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/8/8a/Loudspeaker.svg/11px-Loudspeaker.svg.png")center
          Read more

          Trompette piccolo

          Image
          Ne doit pas être confondu avec trompette de poche. Trompette piccolo en si bémol, avec des branches d'embouchure différentes pour le si bémol (la plus courte) ou la (la plus longue) Trompette piccolo La trompette piccolo est la plus petite de la famille des trompettes. Elle joue une octave plus haut que la trompette standard en si bémol. La plupart des trompettes piccolo sont conçues pour jouer dans les deux tonalités de si bémol ou la, en utilisant une branche d'embouchure différente pour chaque tonalité. Le tube de la trompette piccolo en si bémol a une longueur moitié de celle de la trompette normale en si bémol. Des trompettes piccolo en sol, fa, ut sont également fabriquées, mais elles sont rares. La trompette soprano en ré, aussi connu comme la « trompette Bach », a été inventée vers 1890 par le facteur belge Victor-Charles Mahillon pour jouer les parties hautes de la trompette dans la musique de Bach et Haendel. La trompette piccolo moderne permet aux
          Read more