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This question appears to be off-topic. The users who voted to close gave this specific reason:


  • "Proofreading questions are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified." – Robusto, Laurel, jimm101, J. Taylor, Jim

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    12 hours ago


















  • That isn't a question; it is a statement.
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That isn't a question; it is a statement.
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That isn't a question; it is a statement.
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You can turn it into a question by inverting the subject and verb:




Is she to prepare a revised document?




Note that "revised" is corrected above to its appropriate form as a modifier. You could also simplify and strengthen the verb:




Is she to revise the document?




Or, for a more colloquial form, you could change the mood (modality):




Should she revise the document?







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    You can turn it into a question by inverting the subject and verb:




    Is she to prepare a revised document?




    Note that "revised" is corrected above to its appropriate form as a modifier. You could also simplify and strengthen the verb:




    Is she to revise the document?




    Or, for a more colloquial form, you could change the mood (modality):




    Should she revise the document?







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      You can turn it into a question by inverting the subject and verb:




      Is she to prepare a revised document?




      Note that "revised" is corrected above to its appropriate form as a modifier. You could also simplify and strengthen the verb:




      Is she to revise the document?




      Or, for a more colloquial form, you could change the mood (modality):




      Should she revise the document?







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        You can turn it into a question by inverting the subject and verb:




        Is she to prepare a revised document?




        Note that "revised" is corrected above to its appropriate form as a modifier. You could also simplify and strengthen the verb:




        Is she to revise the document?




        Or, for a more colloquial form, you could change the mood (modality):




        Should she revise the document?







        share|improve this answer












        You can turn it into a question by inverting the subject and verb:




        Is she to prepare a revised document?




        Note that "revised" is corrected above to its appropriate form as a modifier. You could also simplify and strengthen the verb:




        Is she to revise the document?




        Or, for a more colloquial form, you could change the mood (modality):




        Should she revise the document?








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