Writing structure in thank you note - better way to write it?











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I am writing a thank you note for customer orders.



I am particularly struggling with the line below. Is there a better way to write this?



Your support allows us to continue building the best possible extruded aluminum designs for those like yourself.




Thank you for choosing 'company' to be a part of your project!
Your support allows us to continue building the best possible extruded
aluminum designs for those like yourself.



Our priority is to ensure each step of the ordering process and the
final project is executed to perfection. Did we accomplish this with
your order? Let us hear your feedback.







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    I am writing a thank you note for customer orders.



    I am particularly struggling with the line below. Is there a better way to write this?



    Your support allows us to continue building the best possible extruded aluminum designs for those like yourself.




    Thank you for choosing 'company' to be a part of your project!
    Your support allows us to continue building the best possible extruded
    aluminum designs for those like yourself.



    Our priority is to ensure each step of the ordering process and the
    final project is executed to perfection. Did we accomplish this with
    your order? Let us hear your feedback.







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      I am writing a thank you note for customer orders.



      I am particularly struggling with the line below. Is there a better way to write this?



      Your support allows us to continue building the best possible extruded aluminum designs for those like yourself.




      Thank you for choosing 'company' to be a part of your project!
      Your support allows us to continue building the best possible extruded
      aluminum designs for those like yourself.



      Our priority is to ensure each step of the ordering process and the
      final project is executed to perfection. Did we accomplish this with
      your order? Let us hear your feedback.







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      I am writing a thank you note for customer orders.



      I am particularly struggling with the line below. Is there a better way to write this?



      Your support allows us to continue building the best possible extruded aluminum designs for those like yourself.




      Thank you for choosing 'company' to be a part of your project!
      Your support allows us to continue building the best possible extruded
      aluminum designs for those like yourself.



      Our priority is to ensure each step of the ordering process and the
      final project is executed to perfection. Did we accomplish this with
      your order? Let us hear your feedback.







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