Sentence construction to achieve the correct meaning











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Consider the following information:




  • We have a panel of lenders

  • Some of the individual lenders in the panel have won awards, but not all

  • Our panel has not won an award


I want to convey this information in a sentence, but which of the following (if any) is correct?




  • ... with our panel of award winning lenders

  • ... with our award winning panel of lenders


Or there could be a better way.



Thanks in advance.










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    Consider the following information:




    • We have a panel of lenders

    • Some of the individual lenders in the panel have won awards, but not all

    • Our panel has not won an award


    I want to convey this information in a sentence, but which of the following (if any) is correct?




    • ... with our panel of award winning lenders

    • ... with our award winning panel of lenders


    Or there could be a better way.



    Thanks in advance.










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      Consider the following information:




      • We have a panel of lenders

      • Some of the individual lenders in the panel have won awards, but not all

      • Our panel has not won an award


      I want to convey this information in a sentence, but which of the following (if any) is correct?




      • ... with our panel of award winning lenders

      • ... with our award winning panel of lenders


      Or there could be a better way.



      Thanks in advance.










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      Consider the following information:




      • We have a panel of lenders

      • Some of the individual lenders in the panel have won awards, but not all

      • Our panel has not won an award


      I want to convey this information in a sentence, but which of the following (if any) is correct?




      • ... with our panel of award winning lenders

      • ... with our award winning panel of lenders


      Or there could be a better way.



      Thanks in advance.







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