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I work for a holiday company and creating an email that gets sent to people who have booked their holiday. It basically is asking them to book "extras" to their holiday. The thing is, some people may have booked these already and it's very hard to take these people out of this big email list. So I've decided I'll keep people in there who HAVE booked their extras and those who HAVEN'T as well. I don't want people who have booked their extras to then think they haven't when they receive this email so I need to word it carefully.
I know what I want to say but don't know how to write it well. I wanted to say something along the lines of:
" If you're already booked these, then don't worry. "
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I work for a holiday company and creating an email that gets sent to people who have booked their holiday. It basically is asking them to book "extras" to their holiday. The thing is, some people may have booked these already and it's very hard to take these people out of this big email list. So I've decided I'll keep people in there who HAVE booked their extras and those who HAVEN'T as well. I don't want people who have booked their extras to then think they haven't when they receive this email so I need to word it carefully.
I know what I want to say but don't know how to write it well. I wanted to say something along the lines of:
" If you're already booked these, then don't worry. "
word-choice
asked Oct 1 at 10:09
Ben
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– Kris
Oct 1 at 10:36
'If you have already booked', not are.
– Kate Bunting
Oct 1 at 16:12
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I work for a holiday company and creating an email that gets sent to people who have booked their holiday. It basically is asking them to book "extras" to their holiday. The thing is, some people may have booked these already and it's very hard to take these people out of this big email list. So I've decided I'll keep people in there who HAVE booked their extras and those who HAVEN'T as well. I don't want people who have booked their extras to then think they haven't when they receive this email so I need to word it carefully.
I know what I want to say but don't know how to write it well. I wanted to say something along the lines of:
" If you're already booked these, then don't worry. "
word-choice
asked Oct 1 at 10:09
Ben
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I work for a holiday company and creating an email that gets sent to people who have booked their holiday. It basically is asking them to book "extras" to their holiday. The thing is, some people may have booked these already and it's very hard to take these people out of this big email list. So I've decided I'll keep people in there who HAVE booked their extras and those who HAVEN'T as well. I don't want people who have booked their extras to then think they haven't when they receive this email so I need to word it carefully.
I know what I want to say but don't know how to write it well. I wanted to say something along the lines of:
" If you're already booked these, then don't worry. "
word-choice
word-choice
asked Oct 1 at 10:09
Ben
91
asked Oct 1 at 10:09
Ben
91
asked Oct 1 at 10:09
Ben
91
asked Oct 1 at 10:09
Ben
91
asked Oct 1 at 10:09
Ben
91
91
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bumped to the homepage by Community♦ 30 mins ago
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May be migrated to Writing
– Kris
Oct 1 at 10:36
'If you have already booked', not are.
– Kate Bunting
Oct 1 at 16:12
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May be migrated to Writing
– Kris
Oct 1 at 10:36
'If you have already booked', not are.
– Kate Bunting
Oct 1 at 16:12
May be migrated to Writing
– Kris
Oct 1 at 10:36
May be migrated to Writing
– Kris
Oct 1 at 10:36
'If you have already booked', not are.
– Kate Bunting
Oct 1 at 16:12
'If you have already booked', not are.
– Kate Bunting
Oct 1 at 16:12
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I'd use something simple like:
If you've already booked your holiday, please disregard this
message/email.
It's always recommended to use a simple and clear language to avoid any misunderstanding. Styling your text properly also plays a significant role in getting the right kind of message through. So I'd put the above quote in the beginning of my email and style it so it pops out, e.g. using bold font, a different color or put it some kind of bordered text box so it's obvious. This way people who have already booked a holiday will notice it right away and simply move on.
answered Oct 1 at 12:45
Ralitsa Hadzhieva
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I'd use something simple like:
If you've already booked your holiday, please disregard this
message/email.
It's always recommended to use a simple and clear language to avoid any misunderstanding. Styling your text properly also plays a significant role in getting the right kind of message through. So I'd put the above quote in the beginning of my email and style it so it pops out, e.g. using bold font, a different color or put it some kind of bordered text box so it's obvious. This way people who have already booked a holiday will notice it right away and simply move on.
answered Oct 1 at 12:45
Ralitsa Hadzhieva
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I'd use something simple like:
If you've already booked your holiday, please disregard this
message/email.
It's always recommended to use a simple and clear language to avoid any misunderstanding. Styling your text properly also plays a significant role in getting the right kind of message through. So I'd put the above quote in the beginning of my email and style it so it pops out, e.g. using bold font, a different color or put it some kind of bordered text box so it's obvious. This way people who have already booked a holiday will notice it right away and simply move on.
answered Oct 1 at 12:45
Ralitsa Hadzhieva
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I'd use something simple like:
If you've already booked your holiday, please disregard this
message/email.
It's always recommended to use a simple and clear language to avoid any misunderstanding. Styling your text properly also plays a significant role in getting the right kind of message through. So I'd put the above quote in the beginning of my email and style it so it pops out, e.g. using bold font, a different color or put it some kind of bordered text box so it's obvious. This way people who have already booked a holiday will notice it right away and simply move on.
answered Oct 1 at 12:45
Ralitsa Hadzhieva
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I'd use something simple like:
If you've already booked your holiday, please disregard this
message/email.
It's always recommended to use a simple and clear language to avoid any misunderstanding. Styling your text properly also plays a significant role in getting the right kind of message through. So I'd put the above quote in the beginning of my email and style it so it pops out, e.g. using bold font, a different color or put it some kind of bordered text box so it's obvious. This way people who have already booked a holiday will notice it right away and simply move on.
answered Oct 1 at 12:45
Ralitsa Hadzhieva
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answered Oct 1 at 12:45
Ralitsa Hadzhieva
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answered Oct 1 at 12:45
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answered Oct 1 at 12:45
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'If you have already booked', not are.
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