Do these sentences sound natural?
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Our dreams do come true if they are stronger than our fears.
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When your dreams are stronger than your fears they come true
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Our dreams do come true if they are stronger than our fears.
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When your dreams are stronger than your fears they come true
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I think the elephant in the room is that the very idea you are trying to express is patently false and demonstrably wrong. So it doesn't matter how you word it, really. It will sound wrong regardless.
– RegDwigнt♦
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@RegDwigнt: So you're saying that it doesn't matter that "unicorns are purple" is grammatically correct and "unicorns is purple" is grammatically incorrect, because unicorns don't exist, and, even if they did, they wouldn't be purple?
– Scott
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Personally I think the first form is easier to understand. The second seems to tempt an inattentive listener to wonder whether the fears come true or the dreams.
– Chaim
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@Scott I am merely giving the OP something they should be aware of but aren't. Which is kind of the whole point of StackExchange.
– RegDwigнt♦
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Our dreams do come true if they are stronger than our fears.
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When your dreams are stronger than your fears they come true
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Our dreams do come true if they are stronger than our fears.
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When your dreams are stronger than your fears they come true
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I think the elephant in the room is that the very idea you are trying to express is patently false and demonstrably wrong. So it doesn't matter how you word it, really. It will sound wrong regardless.
– RegDwigнt♦
2 hours ago
1
@RegDwigнt: So you're saying that it doesn't matter that "unicorns are purple" is grammatically correct and "unicorns is purple" is grammatically incorrect, because unicorns don't exist, and, even if they did, they wouldn't be purple?
– Scott
2 hours ago
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Personally I think the first form is easier to understand. The second seems to tempt an inattentive listener to wonder whether the fears come true or the dreams.
– Chaim
1 hour ago
@Scott I am merely giving the OP something they should be aware of but aren't. Which is kind of the whole point of StackExchange.
– RegDwigнt♦
57 mins ago
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I think the elephant in the room is that the very idea you are trying to express is patently false and demonstrably wrong. So it doesn't matter how you word it, really. It will sound wrong regardless.
– RegDwigнt♦
2 hours ago
1
@RegDwigнt: So you're saying that it doesn't matter that "unicorns are purple" is grammatically correct and "unicorns is purple" is grammatically incorrect, because unicorns don't exist, and, even if they did, they wouldn't be purple?
– Scott
2 hours ago
1
Personally I think the first form is easier to understand. The second seems to tempt an inattentive listener to wonder whether the fears come true or the dreams.
– Chaim
1 hour ago
@Scott I am merely giving the OP something they should be aware of but aren't. Which is kind of the whole point of StackExchange.
– RegDwigнt♦
57 mins ago
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I think the elephant in the room is that the very idea you are trying to express is patently false and demonstrably wrong. So it doesn't matter how you word it, really. It will sound wrong regardless.
– RegDwigнt♦
2 hours ago
I think the elephant in the room is that the very idea you are trying to express is patently false and demonstrably wrong. So it doesn't matter how you word it, really. It will sound wrong regardless.
– RegDwigнt♦
2 hours ago
1
1
@RegDwigнt: So you're saying that it doesn't matter that "unicorns are purple" is grammatically correct and "unicorns is purple" is grammatically incorrect, because unicorns don't exist, and, even if they did, they wouldn't be purple?
– Scott
2 hours ago
@RegDwigнt: So you're saying that it doesn't matter that "unicorns are purple" is grammatically correct and "unicorns is purple" is grammatically incorrect, because unicorns don't exist, and, even if they did, they wouldn't be purple?
– Scott
2 hours ago
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Personally I think the first form is easier to understand. The second seems to tempt an inattentive listener to wonder whether the fears come true or the dreams.
– Chaim
1 hour ago
Personally I think the first form is easier to understand. The second seems to tempt an inattentive listener to wonder whether the fears come true or the dreams.
– Chaim
1 hour ago
@Scott I am merely giving the OP something they should be aware of but aren't. Which is kind of the whole point of StackExchange.
– RegDwigнt♦
57 mins ago
@Scott I am merely giving the OP something they should be aware of but aren't. Which is kind of the whole point of StackExchange.
– RegDwigнt♦
57 mins ago
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I think the elephant in the room is that the very idea you are trying to express is patently false and demonstrably wrong. So it doesn't matter how you word it, really. It will sound wrong regardless.
– RegDwigнt♦
2 hours ago
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@RegDwigнt: So you're saying that it doesn't matter that "unicorns are purple" is grammatically correct and "unicorns is purple" is grammatically incorrect, because unicorns don't exist, and, even if they did, they wouldn't be purple?
– Scott
2 hours ago
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Personally I think the first form is easier to understand. The second seems to tempt an inattentive listener to wonder whether the fears come true or the dreams.
– Chaim
1 hour ago
@Scott I am merely giving the OP something they should be aware of but aren't. Which is kind of the whole point of StackExchange.
– RegDwigнt♦
57 mins ago