What do you call the rhetoric strategy of purposely writing a paragraph that no one can understand?











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Most of us have come across a paragraph which sounded meaningless to us or which made us wonder if we were intellectually equipped to read it. That may have been the case, but sometimes one writes a text, using specific terminology just to fool people. You read it over and over again and can't make out what the author means. Politicians do that too. What is it called?



This paragraph, from a book by Felix Guattari sounds like what might be an example to me:




“Existence, as a process of deterritorialisation, is a specific inter-machinic operation which superimposes itself on the promotion of singularised existential intensities. And, I repeat, there is no generalised syntax for these deterritorialisations. Existence is not dialectical, not representable. It is hardly livable! ( Intellectual Impostures, p. 158).




... might be an example, if the author's intention were really to confuse. I'm not sure, though.










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    "If you can't blind them with brilliance, baffle them with bullshit."
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    Shouldn't it be purposely instead, esp., in this context?
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    @Cyberherbalist That's what I was afraid of. Afraid that I might have only two neurons.
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    I've re-read that paragraph a few times, and I still can't grasp it. It's academic writing, and as such, it is aimed at a specific field/audience who will already be familiar with those terms and concepts. It is not written for the layman (I hope not!) However, I don't think it is the author's intention to be deliberately incomprehensible. Because who would buy his book then? That type of circumvoluted speech used to be common with politicians. Nowadays they will avoid sounding so high-brow or pompous, because of voters.
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    Existence does, indeed, become almost unliveable, certainly, almost unbearable, in the presence of such hyperbolic flaggymataric cattywampus, written by a grandiloquent snollygoster - useful only to abibliophobes and worthy of the shout 'gardyloo!' Such tarradiddle! - it's causing me to become quite bumfuzzled...
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Most of us have come across a paragraph which sounded meaningless to us or which made us wonder if we were intellectually equipped to read it. That may have been the case, but sometimes one writes a text, using specific terminology just to fool people. You read it over and over again and can't make out what the author means. Politicians do that too. What is it called?



This paragraph, from a book by Felix Guattari sounds like what might be an example to me:




“Existence, as a process of deterritorialisation, is a specific inter-machinic operation which superimposes itself on the promotion of singularised existential intensities. And, I repeat, there is no generalised syntax for these deterritorialisations. Existence is not dialectical, not representable. It is hardly livable! ( Intellectual Impostures, p. 158).




... might be an example, if the author's intention were really to confuse. I'm not sure, though.










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    "If you can't blind them with brilliance, baffle them with bullshit."
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    Shouldn't it be purposely instead, esp., in this context?
    – Kris
    Oct 24 '14 at 16:47






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    @Cyberherbalist That's what I was afraid of. Afraid that I might have only two neurons.
    – Centaurus
    Oct 24 '14 at 22:46






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    I've re-read that paragraph a few times, and I still can't grasp it. It's academic writing, and as such, it is aimed at a specific field/audience who will already be familiar with those terms and concepts. It is not written for the layman (I hope not!) However, I don't think it is the author's intention to be deliberately incomprehensible. Because who would buy his book then? That type of circumvoluted speech used to be common with politicians. Nowadays they will avoid sounding so high-brow or pompous, because of voters.
    – Mari-Lou A
    Oct 25 '14 at 8:43








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    Existence does, indeed, become almost unliveable, certainly, almost unbearable, in the presence of such hyperbolic flaggymataric cattywampus, written by a grandiloquent snollygoster - useful only to abibliophobes and worthy of the shout 'gardyloo!' Such tarradiddle! - it's causing me to become quite bumfuzzled...
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    Jan 19 at 7:13













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Most of us have come across a paragraph which sounded meaningless to us or which made us wonder if we were intellectually equipped to read it. That may have been the case, but sometimes one writes a text, using specific terminology just to fool people. You read it over and over again and can't make out what the author means. Politicians do that too. What is it called?



This paragraph, from a book by Felix Guattari sounds like what might be an example to me:




“Existence, as a process of deterritorialisation, is a specific inter-machinic operation which superimposes itself on the promotion of singularised existential intensities. And, I repeat, there is no generalised syntax for these deterritorialisations. Existence is not dialectical, not representable. It is hardly livable! ( Intellectual Impostures, p. 158).




... might be an example, if the author's intention were really to confuse. I'm not sure, though.










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Most of us have come across a paragraph which sounded meaningless to us or which made us wonder if we were intellectually equipped to read it. That may have been the case, but sometimes one writes a text, using specific terminology just to fool people. You read it over and over again and can't make out what the author means. Politicians do that too. What is it called?



This paragraph, from a book by Felix Guattari sounds like what might be an example to me:




“Existence, as a process of deterritorialisation, is a specific inter-machinic operation which superimposes itself on the promotion of singularised existential intensities. And, I repeat, there is no generalised syntax for these deterritorialisations. Existence is not dialectical, not representable. It is hardly livable! ( Intellectual Impostures, p. 158).




... might be an example, if the author's intention were really to confuse. I'm not sure, though.







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    "If you can't blind them with brilliance, baffle them with bullshit."
    – Hellion
    Oct 24 '14 at 16:31






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    Shouldn't it be purposely instead, esp., in this context?
    – Kris
    Oct 24 '14 at 16:47






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    @Cyberherbalist That's what I was afraid of. Afraid that I might have only two neurons.
    – Centaurus
    Oct 24 '14 at 22:46






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    I've re-read that paragraph a few times, and I still can't grasp it. It's academic writing, and as such, it is aimed at a specific field/audience who will already be familiar with those terms and concepts. It is not written for the layman (I hope not!) However, I don't think it is the author's intention to be deliberately incomprehensible. Because who would buy his book then? That type of circumvoluted speech used to be common with politicians. Nowadays they will avoid sounding so high-brow or pompous, because of voters.
    – Mari-Lou A
    Oct 25 '14 at 8:43








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    Existence does, indeed, become almost unliveable, certainly, almost unbearable, in the presence of such hyperbolic flaggymataric cattywampus, written by a grandiloquent snollygoster - useful only to abibliophobes and worthy of the shout 'gardyloo!' Such tarradiddle! - it's causing me to become quite bumfuzzled...
    – Jelila
    Jan 19 at 7:13














  • 4




    "If you can't blind them with brilliance, baffle them with bullshit."
    – Hellion
    Oct 24 '14 at 16:31






  • 2




    Shouldn't it be purposely instead, esp., in this context?
    – Kris
    Oct 24 '14 at 16:47






  • 1




    @Cyberherbalist That's what I was afraid of. Afraid that I might have only two neurons.
    – Centaurus
    Oct 24 '14 at 22:46






  • 1




    I've re-read that paragraph a few times, and I still can't grasp it. It's academic writing, and as such, it is aimed at a specific field/audience who will already be familiar with those terms and concepts. It is not written for the layman (I hope not!) However, I don't think it is the author's intention to be deliberately incomprehensible. Because who would buy his book then? That type of circumvoluted speech used to be common with politicians. Nowadays they will avoid sounding so high-brow or pompous, because of voters.
    – Mari-Lou A
    Oct 25 '14 at 8:43








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    Existence does, indeed, become almost unliveable, certainly, almost unbearable, in the presence of such hyperbolic flaggymataric cattywampus, written by a grandiloquent snollygoster - useful only to abibliophobes and worthy of the shout 'gardyloo!' Such tarradiddle! - it's causing me to become quite bumfuzzled...
    – Jelila
    Jan 19 at 7:13








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"If you can't blind them with brilliance, baffle them with bullshit."
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Oct 24 '14 at 16:31




"If you can't blind them with brilliance, baffle them with bullshit."
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Oct 24 '14 at 16:31




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Shouldn't it be purposely instead, esp., in this context?
– Kris
Oct 24 '14 at 16:47




Shouldn't it be purposely instead, esp., in this context?
– Kris
Oct 24 '14 at 16:47




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@Cyberherbalist That's what I was afraid of. Afraid that I might have only two neurons.
– Centaurus
Oct 24 '14 at 22:46




@Cyberherbalist That's what I was afraid of. Afraid that I might have only two neurons.
– Centaurus
Oct 24 '14 at 22:46




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I've re-read that paragraph a few times, and I still can't grasp it. It's academic writing, and as such, it is aimed at a specific field/audience who will already be familiar with those terms and concepts. It is not written for the layman (I hope not!) However, I don't think it is the author's intention to be deliberately incomprehensible. Because who would buy his book then? That type of circumvoluted speech used to be common with politicians. Nowadays they will avoid sounding so high-brow or pompous, because of voters.
– Mari-Lou A
Oct 25 '14 at 8:43






I've re-read that paragraph a few times, and I still can't grasp it. It's academic writing, and as such, it is aimed at a specific field/audience who will already be familiar with those terms and concepts. It is not written for the layman (I hope not!) However, I don't think it is the author's intention to be deliberately incomprehensible. Because who would buy his book then? That type of circumvoluted speech used to be common with politicians. Nowadays they will avoid sounding so high-brow or pompous, because of voters.
– Mari-Lou A
Oct 25 '14 at 8:43






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Existence does, indeed, become almost unliveable, certainly, almost unbearable, in the presence of such hyperbolic flaggymataric cattywampus, written by a grandiloquent snollygoster - useful only to abibliophobes and worthy of the shout 'gardyloo!' Such tarradiddle! - it's causing me to become quite bumfuzzled...
– Jelila
Jan 19 at 7:13




Existence does, indeed, become almost unliveable, certainly, almost unbearable, in the presence of such hyperbolic flaggymataric cattywampus, written by a grandiloquent snollygoster - useful only to abibliophobes and worthy of the shout 'gardyloo!' Such tarradiddle! - it's causing me to become quite bumfuzzled...
– Jelila
Jan 19 at 7:13










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Obfuscation:




To make so confused or opaque as to be difficult to perceive or understand: A great effort was made... to obscure or obfuscate the truth - Robert Conquest.

To render indistinct or dim; darken; the process of darkening or obscuring so as to hinder ready analysis.




Is it a literary device? I can't find it listed as such. Is it a rhetorical device? Absolutely. It is practiced by politicians and academics, and criticized by sharp minds like Mark Twain and George Orwell.






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    It might be useful to examine Wikipedia's article on the subject of a book where the quote also appeared:



    Fashionable Nonsense



    The Wikipedia article in itself is delightful. It cites one philosopher, Bruce Fink, who was incensed by the book and claimed that the authors are 'demanding that "serious writing" do nothing other than "convey clear meanings".' Which made me roll around the floor, laughing, concerning the very idea of serious writing conveying obfuscation as its product!



    You can't make this stuff up. Or rather, you can, and the very pretentious pseudo-intellectuals among us will get all huffy about the idea of conveying clear meanings.






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    • I presume the fact that it is absolutely impossible from your post alone to get any idea of what you're really talking about is intentional here?
      – Janus Bahs Jacquet
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    • @JanusBahsJacquet: you can assume this is intentional, if you want to! :-)
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    An academic or pseudo-intellectual who uses convoluted phrases in order to intimidate the lay person, ostentate his or her position, and possibly, disguise the fact that they have nothing of any importance to say, is commonly called a windbag.



    If you are looking for a fancier term for verbosity, I present pressologia




    Perissology means using more words than necessary to explain one’s
    meaning, a pleonasm. Since perissology is three letters longer than
    pleonasm but means the same, you may argue it’s an example of the
    related habit of using long words when shorter ones will do.




    In A Dictionary of Literary Devices: Gradus, A-Z by Bernard Marie Dupriez, we learn that it is indeed a tactic, a form of strategy for filling an empty page or moments of silence. However, as I understand it, it needn't be incomprehensible.




    pressology is one of the principle devices used by the media in their production of filler or padding




    A similar rhetorical device is battology, which Richard Nordquist defines as "A rhetorical term for needless and tiresome repetition in speaking or writing". It reminds me of the Italian verb battere and gerund form battendo, which can be translated to hammering, and the English idiom to beat around the bush when someone is deliberately being evasive or unclear.



    But the best word I found, and one which didn't have me scrambling for my dictionary, is the pejorative and informal term academese.




    Academese is characteristic of academicians who are writing for a
    highly specialized but limited audience, or who have a limited grasp
    of how to make their arguments clearly and specifically" (Garner's
    Modern American Usage, 2009).




    A further example of academese is provided here, the words which I have placed in bold are the academese expressions.




    Vernacular Equivalents to Academese



    "[E]ffective academic writing tends to be bilingual (or 'diglossial'),
    making its point in Academese and then making it again in the
    vernacular, a repetition that, interestingly, alters the meaning. Here
    is an example of such bilingualism from a review of a book on
    evolutionary biology by a professor of ecology and evolution, Jerry A.
    Coyne. Coyne is explaining the theory that males are biologically
    wired to compete for females. Coyne makes his point both in Academese,
    which I italicize, and in the vernacular, staging a dialogue in the
    text between the writer's (and the reader's) academic self and his
    'lay' self: 'It is this internecine male competitiveness that is
    assumed to have driven not only the evolution of increased male body
    size
    (on average, bigger is better in a physical contest), but also of
    hormonally mediated male aggression
    (there is no use being the biggest
    guy on the block if you are a wallflower).'




    source: Gerald Graff, Clueless in Academe: How Schooling Obscures the Life of the Mind. Yale Univ. Press, 2003






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      If a writer or speaker appears to be making a topic complicated or confusing, obfuscate comes to mind:




      to make (something) more difficult to understand



      Politicians keep obfuscating the issues.



      Their explanations only serve to obfuscate and confuse.




      Impenetrable could describe an unclear passage with complicated language, structure, and jargon:




      impossible to understand



      an impenetrable thicket of verbiage







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        I agree with "obfuscate" in situations where there is some information that the writer is trying to hide from the reader. In the example quoted in the question, though, I'm not convinced that there's any actual information underlying this word salad.






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          I would suggest academic obscurantism, a phrase in current use that perfectly describes this phenomenon, especially since the rise of postmodernism. Obscurantism was originally coined in 18th century Germany to criticize opponents of the Enlightenment, but its meaning has expanded to include




          a style (as in literature or art) characterized by deliberate vagueness or abstruseness



          an act or instance of obscurantism




          Thus Ardath Mayhar admonishes his fellow writers in Through the Stone Wall: Lessons After Thirty Years of Writing:




          Writing is for people, not for those who practice artistic one-upmanship or academic obscurantism. Any mode undecipherable to anyone except a professor of creative writing or another avant-garde writer is going to die soon and completely.







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            It sounds like you are looking for a word to speak to the technique not just the outcome. I would use either:



            Jargon-y




            He was very jargon-y in order to avoid admitting he didn't know what
            he was talking about




            or any word ending with -ease based on what terms of art are being used for the effect.




            He enjoyed how his business-ease prevented anyone from questioning his
            qualifications.



            Her answer was full of a lot of legal-ease but not a lot of answer.







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              Obfuscation:




              To make so confused or opaque as to be difficult to perceive or understand: A great effort was made... to obscure or obfuscate the truth - Robert Conquest.

              To render indistinct or dim; darken; the process of darkening or obscuring so as to hinder ready analysis.




              Is it a literary device? I can't find it listed as such. Is it a rhetorical device? Absolutely. It is practiced by politicians and academics, and criticized by sharp minds like Mark Twain and George Orwell.






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                Obfuscation:




                To make so confused or opaque as to be difficult to perceive or understand: A great effort was made... to obscure or obfuscate the truth - Robert Conquest.

                To render indistinct or dim; darken; the process of darkening or obscuring so as to hinder ready analysis.




                Is it a literary device? I can't find it listed as such. Is it a rhetorical device? Absolutely. It is practiced by politicians and academics, and criticized by sharp minds like Mark Twain and George Orwell.






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                  Obfuscation:




                  To make so confused or opaque as to be difficult to perceive or understand: A great effort was made... to obscure or obfuscate the truth - Robert Conquest.

                  To render indistinct or dim; darken; the process of darkening or obscuring so as to hinder ready analysis.




                  Is it a literary device? I can't find it listed as such. Is it a rhetorical device? Absolutely. It is practiced by politicians and academics, and criticized by sharp minds like Mark Twain and George Orwell.






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                  Obfuscation:




                  To make so confused or opaque as to be difficult to perceive or understand: A great effort was made... to obscure or obfuscate the truth - Robert Conquest.

                  To render indistinct or dim; darken; the process of darkening or obscuring so as to hinder ready analysis.




                  Is it a literary device? I can't find it listed as such. Is it a rhetorical device? Absolutely. It is practiced by politicians and academics, and criticized by sharp minds like Mark Twain and George Orwell.







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                      It might be useful to examine Wikipedia's article on the subject of a book where the quote also appeared:



                      Fashionable Nonsense



                      The Wikipedia article in itself is delightful. It cites one philosopher, Bruce Fink, who was incensed by the book and claimed that the authors are 'demanding that "serious writing" do nothing other than "convey clear meanings".' Which made me roll around the floor, laughing, concerning the very idea of serious writing conveying obfuscation as its product!



                      You can't make this stuff up. Or rather, you can, and the very pretentious pseudo-intellectuals among us will get all huffy about the idea of conveying clear meanings.






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                      • I presume the fact that it is absolutely impossible from your post alone to get any idea of what you're really talking about is intentional here?
                        – Janus Bahs Jacquet
                        Oct 26 '14 at 16:03










                      • @JanusBahsJacquet: you can assume this is intentional, if you want to! :-)
                        – Cyberherbalist
                        Oct 27 '14 at 17:14















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                      It might be useful to examine Wikipedia's article on the subject of a book where the quote also appeared:



                      Fashionable Nonsense



                      The Wikipedia article in itself is delightful. It cites one philosopher, Bruce Fink, who was incensed by the book and claimed that the authors are 'demanding that "serious writing" do nothing other than "convey clear meanings".' Which made me roll around the floor, laughing, concerning the very idea of serious writing conveying obfuscation as its product!



                      You can't make this stuff up. Or rather, you can, and the very pretentious pseudo-intellectuals among us will get all huffy about the idea of conveying clear meanings.






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                      • I presume the fact that it is absolutely impossible from your post alone to get any idea of what you're really talking about is intentional here?
                        – Janus Bahs Jacquet
                        Oct 26 '14 at 16:03










                      • @JanusBahsJacquet: you can assume this is intentional, if you want to! :-)
                        – Cyberherbalist
                        Oct 27 '14 at 17:14













                      up vote
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                      up vote
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                      It might be useful to examine Wikipedia's article on the subject of a book where the quote also appeared:



                      Fashionable Nonsense



                      The Wikipedia article in itself is delightful. It cites one philosopher, Bruce Fink, who was incensed by the book and claimed that the authors are 'demanding that "serious writing" do nothing other than "convey clear meanings".' Which made me roll around the floor, laughing, concerning the very idea of serious writing conveying obfuscation as its product!



                      You can't make this stuff up. Or rather, you can, and the very pretentious pseudo-intellectuals among us will get all huffy about the idea of conveying clear meanings.






                      share|improve this answer












                      It might be useful to examine Wikipedia's article on the subject of a book where the quote also appeared:



                      Fashionable Nonsense



                      The Wikipedia article in itself is delightful. It cites one philosopher, Bruce Fink, who was incensed by the book and claimed that the authors are 'demanding that "serious writing" do nothing other than "convey clear meanings".' Which made me roll around the floor, laughing, concerning the very idea of serious writing conveying obfuscation as its product!



                      You can't make this stuff up. Or rather, you can, and the very pretentious pseudo-intellectuals among us will get all huffy about the idea of conveying clear meanings.







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                      • I presume the fact that it is absolutely impossible from your post alone to get any idea of what you're really talking about is intentional here?
                        – Janus Bahs Jacquet
                        Oct 26 '14 at 16:03










                      • @JanusBahsJacquet: you can assume this is intentional, if you want to! :-)
                        – Cyberherbalist
                        Oct 27 '14 at 17:14


















                      • I presume the fact that it is absolutely impossible from your post alone to get any idea of what you're really talking about is intentional here?
                        – Janus Bahs Jacquet
                        Oct 26 '14 at 16:03










                      • @JanusBahsJacquet: you can assume this is intentional, if you want to! :-)
                        – Cyberherbalist
                        Oct 27 '14 at 17:14
















                      I presume the fact that it is absolutely impossible from your post alone to get any idea of what you're really talking about is intentional here?
                      – Janus Bahs Jacquet
                      Oct 26 '14 at 16:03




                      I presume the fact that it is absolutely impossible from your post alone to get any idea of what you're really talking about is intentional here?
                      – Janus Bahs Jacquet
                      Oct 26 '14 at 16:03












                      @JanusBahsJacquet: you can assume this is intentional, if you want to! :-)
                      – Cyberherbalist
                      Oct 27 '14 at 17:14




                      @JanusBahsJacquet: you can assume this is intentional, if you want to! :-)
                      – Cyberherbalist
                      Oct 27 '14 at 17:14










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                      An academic or pseudo-intellectual who uses convoluted phrases in order to intimidate the lay person, ostentate his or her position, and possibly, disguise the fact that they have nothing of any importance to say, is commonly called a windbag.



                      If you are looking for a fancier term for verbosity, I present pressologia




                      Perissology means using more words than necessary to explain one’s
                      meaning, a pleonasm. Since perissology is three letters longer than
                      pleonasm but means the same, you may argue it’s an example of the
                      related habit of using long words when shorter ones will do.




                      In A Dictionary of Literary Devices: Gradus, A-Z by Bernard Marie Dupriez, we learn that it is indeed a tactic, a form of strategy for filling an empty page or moments of silence. However, as I understand it, it needn't be incomprehensible.




                      pressology is one of the principle devices used by the media in their production of filler or padding




                      A similar rhetorical device is battology, which Richard Nordquist defines as "A rhetorical term for needless and tiresome repetition in speaking or writing". It reminds me of the Italian verb battere and gerund form battendo, which can be translated to hammering, and the English idiom to beat around the bush when someone is deliberately being evasive or unclear.



                      But the best word I found, and one which didn't have me scrambling for my dictionary, is the pejorative and informal term academese.




                      Academese is characteristic of academicians who are writing for a
                      highly specialized but limited audience, or who have a limited grasp
                      of how to make their arguments clearly and specifically" (Garner's
                      Modern American Usage, 2009).




                      A further example of academese is provided here, the words which I have placed in bold are the academese expressions.




                      Vernacular Equivalents to Academese



                      "[E]ffective academic writing tends to be bilingual (or 'diglossial'),
                      making its point in Academese and then making it again in the
                      vernacular, a repetition that, interestingly, alters the meaning. Here
                      is an example of such bilingualism from a review of a book on
                      evolutionary biology by a professor of ecology and evolution, Jerry A.
                      Coyne. Coyne is explaining the theory that males are biologically
                      wired to compete for females. Coyne makes his point both in Academese,
                      which I italicize, and in the vernacular, staging a dialogue in the
                      text between the writer's (and the reader's) academic self and his
                      'lay' self: 'It is this internecine male competitiveness that is
                      assumed to have driven not only the evolution of increased male body
                      size
                      (on average, bigger is better in a physical contest), but also of
                      hormonally mediated male aggression
                      (there is no use being the biggest
                      guy on the block if you are a wallflower).'




                      source: Gerald Graff, Clueless in Academe: How Schooling Obscures the Life of the Mind. Yale Univ. Press, 2003






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                        An academic or pseudo-intellectual who uses convoluted phrases in order to intimidate the lay person, ostentate his or her position, and possibly, disguise the fact that they have nothing of any importance to say, is commonly called a windbag.



                        If you are looking for a fancier term for verbosity, I present pressologia




                        Perissology means using more words than necessary to explain one’s
                        meaning, a pleonasm. Since perissology is three letters longer than
                        pleonasm but means the same, you may argue it’s an example of the
                        related habit of using long words when shorter ones will do.




                        In A Dictionary of Literary Devices: Gradus, A-Z by Bernard Marie Dupriez, we learn that it is indeed a tactic, a form of strategy for filling an empty page or moments of silence. However, as I understand it, it needn't be incomprehensible.




                        pressology is one of the principle devices used by the media in their production of filler or padding




                        A similar rhetorical device is battology, which Richard Nordquist defines as "A rhetorical term for needless and tiresome repetition in speaking or writing". It reminds me of the Italian verb battere and gerund form battendo, which can be translated to hammering, and the English idiom to beat around the bush when someone is deliberately being evasive or unclear.



                        But the best word I found, and one which didn't have me scrambling for my dictionary, is the pejorative and informal term academese.




                        Academese is characteristic of academicians who are writing for a
                        highly specialized but limited audience, or who have a limited grasp
                        of how to make their arguments clearly and specifically" (Garner's
                        Modern American Usage, 2009).




                        A further example of academese is provided here, the words which I have placed in bold are the academese expressions.




                        Vernacular Equivalents to Academese



                        "[E]ffective academic writing tends to be bilingual (or 'diglossial'),
                        making its point in Academese and then making it again in the
                        vernacular, a repetition that, interestingly, alters the meaning. Here
                        is an example of such bilingualism from a review of a book on
                        evolutionary biology by a professor of ecology and evolution, Jerry A.
                        Coyne. Coyne is explaining the theory that males are biologically
                        wired to compete for females. Coyne makes his point both in Academese,
                        which I italicize, and in the vernacular, staging a dialogue in the
                        text between the writer's (and the reader's) academic self and his
                        'lay' self: 'It is this internecine male competitiveness that is
                        assumed to have driven not only the evolution of increased male body
                        size
                        (on average, bigger is better in a physical contest), but also of
                        hormonally mediated male aggression
                        (there is no use being the biggest
                        guy on the block if you are a wallflower).'




                        source: Gerald Graff, Clueless in Academe: How Schooling Obscures the Life of the Mind. Yale Univ. Press, 2003






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                          An academic or pseudo-intellectual who uses convoluted phrases in order to intimidate the lay person, ostentate his or her position, and possibly, disguise the fact that they have nothing of any importance to say, is commonly called a windbag.



                          If you are looking for a fancier term for verbosity, I present pressologia




                          Perissology means using more words than necessary to explain one’s
                          meaning, a pleonasm. Since perissology is three letters longer than
                          pleonasm but means the same, you may argue it’s an example of the
                          related habit of using long words when shorter ones will do.




                          In A Dictionary of Literary Devices: Gradus, A-Z by Bernard Marie Dupriez, we learn that it is indeed a tactic, a form of strategy for filling an empty page or moments of silence. However, as I understand it, it needn't be incomprehensible.




                          pressology is one of the principle devices used by the media in their production of filler or padding




                          A similar rhetorical device is battology, which Richard Nordquist defines as "A rhetorical term for needless and tiresome repetition in speaking or writing". It reminds me of the Italian verb battere and gerund form battendo, which can be translated to hammering, and the English idiom to beat around the bush when someone is deliberately being evasive or unclear.



                          But the best word I found, and one which didn't have me scrambling for my dictionary, is the pejorative and informal term academese.




                          Academese is characteristic of academicians who are writing for a
                          highly specialized but limited audience, or who have a limited grasp
                          of how to make their arguments clearly and specifically" (Garner's
                          Modern American Usage, 2009).




                          A further example of academese is provided here, the words which I have placed in bold are the academese expressions.




                          Vernacular Equivalents to Academese



                          "[E]ffective academic writing tends to be bilingual (or 'diglossial'),
                          making its point in Academese and then making it again in the
                          vernacular, a repetition that, interestingly, alters the meaning. Here
                          is an example of such bilingualism from a review of a book on
                          evolutionary biology by a professor of ecology and evolution, Jerry A.
                          Coyne. Coyne is explaining the theory that males are biologically
                          wired to compete for females. Coyne makes his point both in Academese,
                          which I italicize, and in the vernacular, staging a dialogue in the
                          text between the writer's (and the reader's) academic self and his
                          'lay' self: 'It is this internecine male competitiveness that is
                          assumed to have driven not only the evolution of increased male body
                          size
                          (on average, bigger is better in a physical contest), but also of
                          hormonally mediated male aggression
                          (there is no use being the biggest
                          guy on the block if you are a wallflower).'




                          source: Gerald Graff, Clueless in Academe: How Schooling Obscures the Life of the Mind. Yale Univ. Press, 2003






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                          An academic or pseudo-intellectual who uses convoluted phrases in order to intimidate the lay person, ostentate his or her position, and possibly, disguise the fact that they have nothing of any importance to say, is commonly called a windbag.



                          If you are looking for a fancier term for verbosity, I present pressologia




                          Perissology means using more words than necessary to explain one’s
                          meaning, a pleonasm. Since perissology is three letters longer than
                          pleonasm but means the same, you may argue it’s an example of the
                          related habit of using long words when shorter ones will do.




                          In A Dictionary of Literary Devices: Gradus, A-Z by Bernard Marie Dupriez, we learn that it is indeed a tactic, a form of strategy for filling an empty page or moments of silence. However, as I understand it, it needn't be incomprehensible.




                          pressology is one of the principle devices used by the media in their production of filler or padding




                          A similar rhetorical device is battology, which Richard Nordquist defines as "A rhetorical term for needless and tiresome repetition in speaking or writing". It reminds me of the Italian verb battere and gerund form battendo, which can be translated to hammering, and the English idiom to beat around the bush when someone is deliberately being evasive or unclear.



                          But the best word I found, and one which didn't have me scrambling for my dictionary, is the pejorative and informal term academese.




                          Academese is characteristic of academicians who are writing for a
                          highly specialized but limited audience, or who have a limited grasp
                          of how to make their arguments clearly and specifically" (Garner's
                          Modern American Usage, 2009).




                          A further example of academese is provided here, the words which I have placed in bold are the academese expressions.




                          Vernacular Equivalents to Academese



                          "[E]ffective academic writing tends to be bilingual (or 'diglossial'),
                          making its point in Academese and then making it again in the
                          vernacular, a repetition that, interestingly, alters the meaning. Here
                          is an example of such bilingualism from a review of a book on
                          evolutionary biology by a professor of ecology and evolution, Jerry A.
                          Coyne. Coyne is explaining the theory that males are biologically
                          wired to compete for females. Coyne makes his point both in Academese,
                          which I italicize, and in the vernacular, staging a dialogue in the
                          text between the writer's (and the reader's) academic self and his
                          'lay' self: 'It is this internecine male competitiveness that is
                          assumed to have driven not only the evolution of increased male body
                          size
                          (on average, bigger is better in a physical contest), but also of
                          hormonally mediated male aggression
                          (there is no use being the biggest
                          guy on the block if you are a wallflower).'




                          source: Gerald Graff, Clueless in Academe: How Schooling Obscures the Life of the Mind. Yale Univ. Press, 2003







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                              If a writer or speaker appears to be making a topic complicated or confusing, obfuscate comes to mind:




                              to make (something) more difficult to understand



                              Politicians keep obfuscating the issues.



                              Their explanations only serve to obfuscate and confuse.




                              Impenetrable could describe an unclear passage with complicated language, structure, and jargon:




                              impossible to understand



                              an impenetrable thicket of verbiage







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                                If a writer or speaker appears to be making a topic complicated or confusing, obfuscate comes to mind:




                                to make (something) more difficult to understand



                                Politicians keep obfuscating the issues.



                                Their explanations only serve to obfuscate and confuse.




                                Impenetrable could describe an unclear passage with complicated language, structure, and jargon:




                                impossible to understand



                                an impenetrable thicket of verbiage







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                                  If a writer or speaker appears to be making a topic complicated or confusing, obfuscate comes to mind:




                                  to make (something) more difficult to understand



                                  Politicians keep obfuscating the issues.



                                  Their explanations only serve to obfuscate and confuse.




                                  Impenetrable could describe an unclear passage with complicated language, structure, and jargon:




                                  impossible to understand



                                  an impenetrable thicket of verbiage







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                                  If a writer or speaker appears to be making a topic complicated or confusing, obfuscate comes to mind:




                                  to make (something) more difficult to understand



                                  Politicians keep obfuscating the issues.



                                  Their explanations only serve to obfuscate and confuse.




                                  Impenetrable could describe an unclear passage with complicated language, structure, and jargon:




                                  impossible to understand



                                  an impenetrable thicket of verbiage








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                                      I agree with "obfuscate" in situations where there is some information that the writer is trying to hide from the reader. In the example quoted in the question, though, I'm not convinced that there's any actual information underlying this word salad.






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                                        I agree with "obfuscate" in situations where there is some information that the writer is trying to hide from the reader. In the example quoted in the question, though, I'm not convinced that there's any actual information underlying this word salad.






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                                          I agree with "obfuscate" in situations where there is some information that the writer is trying to hide from the reader. In the example quoted in the question, though, I'm not convinced that there's any actual information underlying this word salad.






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                                          I agree with "obfuscate" in situations where there is some information that the writer is trying to hide from the reader. In the example quoted in the question, though, I'm not convinced that there's any actual information underlying this word salad.







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                                              I would suggest academic obscurantism, a phrase in current use that perfectly describes this phenomenon, especially since the rise of postmodernism. Obscurantism was originally coined in 18th century Germany to criticize opponents of the Enlightenment, but its meaning has expanded to include




                                              a style (as in literature or art) characterized by deliberate vagueness or abstruseness



                                              an act or instance of obscurantism




                                              Thus Ardath Mayhar admonishes his fellow writers in Through the Stone Wall: Lessons After Thirty Years of Writing:




                                              Writing is for people, not for those who practice artistic one-upmanship or academic obscurantism. Any mode undecipherable to anyone except a professor of creative writing or another avant-garde writer is going to die soon and completely.







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                                                I would suggest academic obscurantism, a phrase in current use that perfectly describes this phenomenon, especially since the rise of postmodernism. Obscurantism was originally coined in 18th century Germany to criticize opponents of the Enlightenment, but its meaning has expanded to include




                                                a style (as in literature or art) characterized by deliberate vagueness or abstruseness



                                                an act or instance of obscurantism




                                                Thus Ardath Mayhar admonishes his fellow writers in Through the Stone Wall: Lessons After Thirty Years of Writing:




                                                Writing is for people, not for those who practice artistic one-upmanship or academic obscurantism. Any mode undecipherable to anyone except a professor of creative writing or another avant-garde writer is going to die soon and completely.







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                                                  I would suggest academic obscurantism, a phrase in current use that perfectly describes this phenomenon, especially since the rise of postmodernism. Obscurantism was originally coined in 18th century Germany to criticize opponents of the Enlightenment, but its meaning has expanded to include




                                                  a style (as in literature or art) characterized by deliberate vagueness or abstruseness



                                                  an act or instance of obscurantism




                                                  Thus Ardath Mayhar admonishes his fellow writers in Through the Stone Wall: Lessons After Thirty Years of Writing:




                                                  Writing is for people, not for those who practice artistic one-upmanship or academic obscurantism. Any mode undecipherable to anyone except a professor of creative writing or another avant-garde writer is going to die soon and completely.







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                                                  I would suggest academic obscurantism, a phrase in current use that perfectly describes this phenomenon, especially since the rise of postmodernism. Obscurantism was originally coined in 18th century Germany to criticize opponents of the Enlightenment, but its meaning has expanded to include




                                                  a style (as in literature or art) characterized by deliberate vagueness or abstruseness



                                                  an act or instance of obscurantism




                                                  Thus Ardath Mayhar admonishes his fellow writers in Through the Stone Wall: Lessons After Thirty Years of Writing:




                                                  Writing is for people, not for those who practice artistic one-upmanship or academic obscurantism. Any mode undecipherable to anyone except a professor of creative writing or another avant-garde writer is going to die soon and completely.








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                                                      It sounds like you are looking for a word to speak to the technique not just the outcome. I would use either:



                                                      Jargon-y




                                                      He was very jargon-y in order to avoid admitting he didn't know what
                                                      he was talking about




                                                      or any word ending with -ease based on what terms of art are being used for the effect.




                                                      He enjoyed how his business-ease prevented anyone from questioning his
                                                      qualifications.



                                                      Her answer was full of a lot of legal-ease but not a lot of answer.







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                                                        It sounds like you are looking for a word to speak to the technique not just the outcome. I would use either:



                                                        Jargon-y




                                                        He was very jargon-y in order to avoid admitting he didn't know what
                                                        he was talking about




                                                        or any word ending with -ease based on what terms of art are being used for the effect.




                                                        He enjoyed how his business-ease prevented anyone from questioning his
                                                        qualifications.



                                                        Her answer was full of a lot of legal-ease but not a lot of answer.







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                                                          It sounds like you are looking for a word to speak to the technique not just the outcome. I would use either:



                                                          Jargon-y




                                                          He was very jargon-y in order to avoid admitting he didn't know what
                                                          he was talking about




                                                          or any word ending with -ease based on what terms of art are being used for the effect.




                                                          He enjoyed how his business-ease prevented anyone from questioning his
                                                          qualifications.



                                                          Her answer was full of a lot of legal-ease but not a lot of answer.







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                                                          It sounds like you are looking for a word to speak to the technique not just the outcome. I would use either:



                                                          Jargon-y




                                                          He was very jargon-y in order to avoid admitting he didn't know what
                                                          he was talking about




                                                          or any word ending with -ease based on what terms of art are being used for the effect.




                                                          He enjoyed how his business-ease prevented anyone from questioning his
                                                          qualifications.



                                                          Her answer was full of a lot of legal-ease but not a lot of answer.








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