How to write 'right after graduation' in biography
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I am writing a biography and I want to write a sentence that is "Right after graduation, I joined the institute of X to work as an academic researcher".
Can you help me in re-writing this sentence in a better way, especially the first part?
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I am writing a biography and I want to write a sentence that is "Right after graduation, I joined the institute of X to work as an academic researcher".
Can you help me in re-writing this sentence in a better way, especially the first part?
grammar word-choice
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What do you think is wrong with it?
– StoneyB
51 mins ago
'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
– Anas
50 mins ago
"joined the institute" is worse...
– Weather Vane
40 mins ago
I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
– StoneyB
38 mins ago
@WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
– StoneyB
9 mins ago
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I am writing a biography and I want to write a sentence that is "Right after graduation, I joined the institute of X to work as an academic researcher".
Can you help me in re-writing this sentence in a better way, especially the first part?
grammar word-choice
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I am writing a biography and I want to write a sentence that is "Right after graduation, I joined the institute of X to work as an academic researcher".
Can you help me in re-writing this sentence in a better way, especially the first part?
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What do you think is wrong with it?
– StoneyB
51 mins ago
'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
– Anas
50 mins ago
"joined the institute" is worse...
– Weather Vane
40 mins ago
I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
– StoneyB
38 mins ago
@WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
– StoneyB
9 mins ago
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What do you think is wrong with it?
– StoneyB
51 mins ago
'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
– Anas
50 mins ago
"joined the institute" is worse...
– Weather Vane
40 mins ago
I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
– StoneyB
38 mins ago
@WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
– StoneyB
9 mins ago
What do you think is wrong with it?
– StoneyB
51 mins ago
What do you think is wrong with it?
– StoneyB
51 mins ago
'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
– Anas
50 mins ago
'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
– Anas
50 mins ago
"joined the institute" is worse...
– Weather Vane
40 mins ago
"joined the institute" is worse...
– Weather Vane
40 mins ago
I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
– StoneyB
38 mins ago
I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
– StoneyB
38 mins ago
@WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
– StoneyB
9 mins ago
@WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
– StoneyB
9 mins ago
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What do you think is wrong with it?
– StoneyB
51 mins ago
'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
– Anas
50 mins ago
"joined the institute" is worse...
– Weather Vane
40 mins ago
I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
– StoneyB
38 mins ago
@WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
– StoneyB
9 mins ago